10.04.19
Oh, for a structural edit, or at least a thorough copy edit, to make this promising steampunk mystery actually readable. Trim the cliches here, delete the awkward phrasing there, cut some of the endless fight scenes and develop the characters into three-dimensional beings and you might have the framework for something quite fun. It does get extra points for having a character called Sandford, though.
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