It sounds like a minor thing but, when a book has so many factual and continuity errors, you're wrenched from the story world. Especially when you have to stop reading to Google something that doesn't seem quite right. I'm pretty sure you don't get your A Level results from the UCAS website. And that white wine doesn't turn red within a few minutes. And that professors aren't described as tenured in the UK. Aside from that, the idea was interesting but the characters were annoying, the plot predictable and the AI not interesting enough. More editing required!
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